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    It couldn't hurt more

    Maggy Potter
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    Post  Maggy Potter Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:38 am

    It couldn't hurt more
    Becauser that was so low
    I can't stop feeling the pain

    It's in my veins
    Aiming for the heart
    Help me I'm going insane

    Where are you now
    Are you going to appologize
    Or you're just leaving town
    And you needed to take one more look
    into my eyes

    Now I realise
    That all of my tries
    We're drifted away
    But I'll still survive
    lil28
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    Post  lil28 Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:44 am

    Well done, Mags Smile
    Maggy Potter
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    Post  Maggy Potter Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:45 am

    Just a quick poem c:
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    Post  Flyin Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:51 am

    That's really nice, did you write it? (Or copied?)
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    Post  Maggy Potter Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:53 am

    I write everything I post c;
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    Post  lil28 Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:54 am

    Hehe I can belive that ;0)
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    Post  Flyin Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:55 am

    Well then, congratulations, because the poem is beautiful!!! I love you
    Maggy Potter
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    Post  Maggy Potter Sun Nov 04, 2012 4:12 am

    *blushies*

    Thanks you guys!
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    Post  lil28 Sun Nov 04, 2012 4:13 am

    You deserve praise XD
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    Post  Maggy Potter Sun Nov 04, 2012 4:17 am

    cheers

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